I'm afraid you are not helping yourself at all.
There is no store description.
There is no list of store keywords.
You don't even bother to mention the category where your software title is supposed to sit.
You don't mentions the development platform.
Basically, all you say is you have gotten your submission rejected and mention a few aspects without even telling what it's about.
Topic:
App Store Distribution & Marketing
SubTopic:
App Review
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